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Song of a Journey




All my feelings are gone today
And I'm nothing but emptiness
This night my emotions decay
I can't bear all this bitterness
No laughs and no tears
Have been seen for so long
This night I no longer fear
To leave this place to be strong



This is time for me to go,
To flee, far away from home
This is time for me to say goodbye
And time to begin the song of a journey


And so my walk begins
Far from my past
And nothing but rain
Is there to heal me at last
It feels like the wind whispers
Like the path opens wide
All this numbness lingers
It's time for me to hide


This is time for me to go
To flee, far away from home
This is time for me to say goodbye
And time to begin the song of  journey


The daylight has come
To save me from the world
The path is my home
When I'm alone I'm not cold
Nothing but me and the way
To bring me to life
It makes me forgot the day
I tried to end this by the knife


This is time for me to go
To flee, far away from home
This is time for me to say goodbye
And time to begin the song of  journey


Home is where the way is
I can't help but feel blooming
And the forest just says
That the coolness will soon be ending
This night over the cliff
I was finally born
Under the Moon even if
I was gone in the morn


This is time for me to go
To flee, far away from life
This is time for me to say goodbye
And time to begin the song of the final journey
Song of a journey
This is kind of a poem, or maybe the lyrics of a future song, in which I tried to describe my state of mind (yep, I'm kind of depressed...) 

English is not my native language, so it would be great from you to let me know if there are any mistakes :)
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Hey ! I'm Elo´se, I'm seventeen and I come from France (so, please, excuse my english, which is maybe a bit bad ^^). I cry when I laugh ; I laugh when I cry ; I love to drive my brother up the wall, singing and playing piano
I love drawing and sometimes painting, but I don't find my drawings very beautiful, so I subscribed in Deviantart in order to have some critics about them. Maybe it will make me improve my way to draw and to paint ;)
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KariLiimatainen Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the :+fav:!
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Arkantia Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
You're welcome ! Your work is really beautiful :)
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btgarts Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Ty so much for the fave! :hug:
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Arkantia Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
You're welcome ! :)
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Thanks for the fav!:D
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Okavanga Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
:iconthumbsupplz: for recent fave!

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Arkantia Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
You're welcome ! Your art is really beautiful Clap 
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Okavanga Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
Many thanks!

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Mononoke-Kitsune Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Filmographer
Thanks so much for the fav! :iconsupertighthugplz:
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korwis Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much for the fav :D
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